Good job man.
I thought that this track would be slightly boring until around 0:30 the percussion came in. I was very surprised because it came in so powerfully. Then when the bass drops at about 1:00 was great. Everything gets quiet and you wonder what's going to happen. Strings come in and then the song starts building up from there. The only thing I didn't like about that percussion pattern was the snap.
Everything sounds really nice and relaxing except it's repetitive. Even though the melodies move constantly and changing often, the percussion gives it a feeling of repetitiveness. Makes the song slightly duller and boring. But, like I said, it's extremely well written. The only thing I would change would be the percussion. Everything else is great.