I like this
What I like about this, is that you're not rapping about anything fake. It's real. I find too many people rapping about fake junk and in this, you're rapping about real-life experiences and such.
This track is really mellow and I like that. The only complaint would easily be the length. If it were longer, that would be better. That, and the part around 1:18 sounded a bit scratchy.
Very good track though.