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there's too much penis in this song and not enough donk. You need to take out the jizz and start focusin on the music man. Keep it up, but next time, stop sucking dick. Actually, you can it's cool if you swing that way.
Author's Response:
I lol'd...BUT I LIKE TEH JIZZ IN MAH HAIRZ!!!1
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you saying the flowers on the body comment reminds me of this short story i read in class called "flowers" by Alice Walker. I hated it. But i have to say it really fits that idea of dead body + flowers. Really paints a picture. Nice track man. Once again, you've made the epic come out of life. Well done and keep it up. Because you're awesome.
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bracket three
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Nice track. Flows very well and has a really sweet groove to it. Only thing I'd say is to bring out the lows in that bass! They're barely audible! It has a very unique tone, that's for sure. But it's not bassy. Great song. It really gets going once the piano comes in. Has a funky daftpunk-esque feel until you bring in your own style - as you said. This has a semi-videogame feel to it. I can really vibe on it.
Great track man. Top notch!
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is a great track man. First off, the beat was simple and really mellow. I liked that. I only didn't like the snare and that melody around 1:50 which I felt killed a bit of the vibe of the entire track.
In terms of your 3000word essay, it was a real insight to how people see and feel about time and life these days. There's no looking back and you shouldn't hold on to worthless things. Don't worry about the future. Just live day by day happily. :)
Author's Response:
For sure man. Thanks for the thoughts. And I'll relisten to that snare.
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I CARE! :D
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buttsex, plox
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Only thing I would add to this is much more variation on the percussion. Instead of having a 4-8 bar loop with on every 4 measure a variation, i would do a 2 minute drum loop with complete variation and originality throughout the piece. I say this thinking of artists such as Ulrich Schnauss who's a great lounge / ambient breakbeat artist.
Of course, that's opinionated. Great track otherwise. Liked it alot. Please come out with more of this.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the advice mate!
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I liked that first melody that was coming in! Definitely throws you off a little bit when the percussion coming in - which is good. Only complaint I would have is that your basses are weak. Very weak. Keep it up man. I liked this. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm not very good to make everything sound very great.. ;/
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lol. I forgot abuot this song. I had reworked loads of shit in it for you! I completely forgot to send it back man! There are things that I really, really like about it. Should've sent you the reworked version. :P ma bad :) Good stuff. :) Repost the finished version one day :)
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What's the finished version going to be like.
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Ahh, this is amazing, although I wish it was mixed and mastered a little bit better. The lows are overpowering the highs. That or, your highs just aren't loud enough. The track has some energy. It's a nice listen. Really enjoying it.
Nice breakdown with the plucks. Again, After listening to this, I would've toned down your bass / pads and turn up the leads. They're amazing but they get drowned out. I even cut the bass on my monitors and thought the same thing. Either way, great track.
Loved it. Very funk-house / Daft Punkesque feel to this song.
Author's Response:
aw, but I love the bass. however, agreed about the mastering. I didn't even do the studio monitor test on this one I was so incensed to get it out. :d I'll not be so lazy next time, eh ;)
thanks for the listen, duder. :D
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I like the melodies alot. This has a good vibe man. I just think that you could change the one synth 0:27. The track would become more powerful if you put a nice layered saw with a chorus and lowpass - Just my opinion though.
Otherwise, the piano really has that dark feeling, but the full feeling of the track doesn't really give off this "hate" feel. Maybe vary the percussion a little bit also. I liked this track. Here, if you want some tips or want to get in touch with some very professional people that can help you out with hiphop, send me a PM. Just here to help. :)
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
its not a hate song bro
to me music is expression of self
and i jus has this feeling of like
if i saw dis punk id fuck his world up
u know, its like a murda track i guess
thnx might pm u about the tips..... maybe
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